Wednesday, December 14, 2011

Can you please critique this?

This is very good.. Who told you this was too descriptive? Its not. It captures the human viewpoint both in language and detail.. a rather morbid tale for my taste, but very well written and interesting.. i was rather confused in some parts but perhaps that was because I was skimming. Overall great job and keep taking "stabs at it" lol

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